view of boardwalk around community pond space ... how does this read?
view in community space in between homes/community house ... effective/clear?
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view of boardwalk around community pond space ... how does this read?
view in community space in between homes/community house ... effective/clear?
They look good Joe! I agree with the other ladies- turn your opacity down in the figures a bit🙂
Hey! Great work! I think the human figures are becoming the focus of the vignette, almost a hindrance in grasping the overall concept. Reducing transparency might help. Also if you are displaying community spaces, I think the vibrancy is missing, you might wanna add diverse figures in terms of age, gender and activities. Include more people but reduces the opacity, use ghosting as a graphic technique. Hope this helps.
The community pond works I think. Were you showing off the access to nature that the boardwalk gives? Also does it really have a railing from one side? :D
Those outlines are super intense! Draws the eye straight to them and away from the landscape.