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    Joseph Price
    Apr 06, 2020
    Edited: Apr 06, 2020

    Critique my photoshop land3040

    in Design Crit

    view of boardwalk around community pond space ... how does this read?

    view in community space in between homes/community house ... effective/clear?




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    Julia Alcorn
    Apr 10, 2020

    They look good Joe! I agree with the other ladies- turn your opacity down in the figures a bit🙂

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    Saba Serkhel
    Apr 07, 2020

    Hey! Great work! I think the human figures are becoming the focus of the vignette, almost a hindrance in grasping the overall concept. Reducing transparency might help. Also if you are displaying community spaces, I think the vibrancy is missing, you might wanna add diverse figures in terms of age, gender and activities. Include more people but reduces the opacity, use ghosting as a graphic technique. Hope this helps.

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    Lynn Abdouni
    Apr 06, 2020

    The community pond works I think. Were you showing off the access to nature that the boardwalk gives? Also does it really have a railing from one side? :D

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    Lynn Abdouni
    Apr 06, 2020

    Those outlines are super intense! Draws the eye straight to them and away from the landscape.

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