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    Joseph Price
    Apr 6, 2020
      ·  Edited: Apr 6, 2020

    Critique my photoshop land3040

    view of boardwalk around community pond space ... how does this read?

    view in community space in between homes/community house ... effective/clear?




    4 comments
    Lynn Abdouni
    Apr 6, 2020

    Those outlines are super intense! Draws the eye straight to them and away from the landscape.

    Lynn Abdouni
    Apr 6, 2020

    The community pond works I think. Were you showing off the access to nature that the boardwalk gives? Also does it really have a railing from one side? :D

    Saba Serkhel
    Apr 7, 2020

    Hey! Great work! I think the human figures are becoming the focus of the vignette, almost a hindrance in grasping the overall concept. Reducing transparency might help. Also if you are displaying community spaces, I think the vibrancy is missing, you might wanna add diverse figures in terms of age, gender and activities. Include more people but reduces the opacity, use ghosting as a graphic technique. Hope this helps.

    Julia Alcorn
    Apr 10, 2020

    They look good Joe! I agree with the other ladies- turn your opacity down in the figures a bit🙂